Friday, August 2, 2024

Friday August 2, 2024 | Journal prompt | Fictional story writing | Help from an AI in writing this story I had written back in 2013

Originally written on: July 11, 2013 

Written by:  Pamela

Please note: The character Gertrude in this story I picked it because like the name.

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Susanne and Rebecca are the biggest fans of the most famous boy band in recorded history. On a cool fall day in October, Susanne saw a crowd outside and called Rebecca over to see it. When they got closer, they saw who it was and squealed with glee. Rebecca started to run down to meet up with them, but Susanne stopped her. "No, you're not going out there," she said. "I would just wait until it is the right time. I suggest that you wait. How would you feel if someone rushed up to you, got in your face and commenced screaming?" "You're right," Rebecca said, "I would feel uncomfortable."

Dylan Knight was recording songs for his upcoming CD. He was an intelligent young adult in his early 20s with a passion for singing. He started singing at age three, when his mother taught him to sing. Ever since then, he always said he wanted to be a singer when he grew up.  

Susanne and Rebecca are the biggest fans of the most famous boy band in recorded history. They have been fans for 20 to 25 years. Rebecca has been a fan since she was 2 years old, and Susanne has been a fan since she was 3.

Gertrude Mac is a 23-year-old aspiring artist who recently moved from Ohio to Beaumont, Texas. She lives in an apartment across the street from Dylan Knight, who is recording songs for his upcoming CD. As a little girl, Gertrude loved to draw pictures of the people and things around her in her hometown back on the west coast.  

Susanne is a writer on the TV series that Rebecca Moody stars in. Dylan Knight wrote the theme song for Rebecca's TV series. Rebecca plays a sassy, dramatic, and unusual teenager who is ready to take on the world. Susanne asked Rebecca if she wanted to go see who was performing. "Just don't do anything I wouldn't do," Susanne called over her shoulder. "Let's go," Rebecca said. As the two girls walked down the street, they saw their favorite boy band! When they got closer, Rebecca was so happy that she cried. Susanne was so choked up that she couldn't speak. When she opened her mouth to say something, nothing came out. That became a huge problem for her. Their favorite band saw the two friends and started walking toward them.

Friday August 2, 2024 | Creative writing prompts for adults | Pretending to have something | Fiction story

I wasn't sure why my boyfriend said he needed to talk.  So I listened.  He was the one who broke things off with me.  Then he tells me that as he was trying to get up, he does not want me to see him struggling.  Struggling with what?  I thought to myself as I said okay as I said out loud that I have pee.  I want to know what he is struggling with?  What is he struggling with?  I thought to myself as I walked to the bathroom.  As I got up from the toilet, I came back and saw that he was gone but left a message.  I guess his family needed him.  

I still don't get why he left?  Did he leave because of my poorly mental health?  Did he leave because of me?  Did he leave because of what I have done?  This I may never know.  

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